Was Boyd Really Exploring A New Topic?
The purpose of writing an inquiry essay
is to explore a topic you are not previously informed about but are interested
in learning more about it. It is supposed to delve deep into areas you never
knew existed and write about the ideas and brand-new concepts you come across.
In all, you demonstrate your learning experience in which you approach the
topic from all sides.
Boyd attempts to write an inquiry
essay by answering the question throughout – “Can Social Media Resolve Social Divisions?”
She goes about interviewing social media users – which are mostly teenagers –
and ask them how they feel about their community and their atmosphere in social
media racially. The interesting part is that she only includes the perspective
of students who feel like their surroundings is racially divided, whether they
know it or not. Each point she brings up is about boys and girls who are inclined
to spend time with people from their own racial background because it gives them
a sense of familiarity and safety in fact. This is also known as homophily, which
means “the practice of connecting with likeminded individuals” (pg. 426).
Nowhere in her writing does she
give a counterargument, where she finds an environment that is not racist. All the
places she mentions, whether it be in schools or on the internet, have some form
of racism that divides people because of the previous experiences and ideals.
There are so many places on the internet that are inclusive of other races,
such as particular forums that bring many people together because of one idea. In
this case, race isn’t an issue because that is not the purpose of the group.
Instead, she leans towards choosing lower privileged schools that are heavily
segregated due to their skin color where they have nicknames for which racial
group hangs out where. On the other hand, in my school background didn’t matter
although the majority of the student population was white. Asians hung out
African Americans, Indians hung out with whites as long as they got along in
personality. My point is, Boyd did not research all places that could have gone
against her main argument, which failed to show that she truly wanted to
explore a new topic.
Comments
Post a Comment