Is Amanda Hess fair in her article?

Should women really be on the internet, or should they stay clear? Amanda Hess discusses this subject in her article, “WHY WOMEN AREN'T WELCOME ON THE INTERNET,” in depth. She illustrates various examples in her life where she has been victimized by cyber bullying and includes other women’s experiences with degrading threats about rape and death.
The article is scattered with Hess’s personal experiences and other situations of other women in power to demonstrate that women in higher standing are targeted more in fear of them having a voice and having more prominence in current events. She includes instances that belittle women, varying from rape threats to a predator posting inappropriate videos on YouTube. She states all these examples to show that women are constantly victimized for their gender and are taken advantage and objectified unwantedly online, particularly Twitter. If women have any influence in social media, they are seen as having too much power and should tone it down, otherwise they will get criticized for it. However, even though she gathers many examples, none of them talk about the other side of her argument, which induces bias.
Hess constantly gives examples of women who are victimized in this article but doesn’t discuss about the women who aren’t affected. Furthermore, she includes claims that are not even supported, such as this – “Every time we call the police, head to court to file a civil protection order, or get sucked into a mental hole by the threats that have been made against us, zeroes drop from our annual incomes. Says Jurgenson, ‘It’s a monetary penalty for being a woman’” (pg. 11). Another example that displays that she is bias towards this topic is that she supports another woman’s views when Hess mentions – “Whenever a male stranger approaches her at a public event, “the hairs on the back of my neck stand up” (pg.  11) This is essentially stereotyping men and their actions, which degrades men. If she wants to empower women, she should not have to put down men. In general, she seems pretty biased and emotional about this issue, which is partially getting in the way of stating the facts although she references many studies and statistics.

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